Wednesday, November 12, 2014

Blog 10: EQ

1. I reviewed the rule of three for writing an E.Q.

2.  a. What is the most important factor in healthy weight loss?
 - This EQ does not meet the rule of three. It does not show depth about the subject especially because weight loss is a touchy subject. Does this weight loss plan apply to diabetics, senior citizens, or teens? On the other hand, the wording is easy to read and I thought the word healthy showed some understanding of their subject because unhealthy weight loss plans do exist.
 
  b. What is most important to securing a conviction in a criminal investigation?
 - The wording is strange, it does not flow correctly. But the direction of the question is good. It has specific parameters to follow that allow a solid base.

  c. What is most important in creating a hairstyle that best satisfies a customer?
 - The subject is clear; A hairdresser not a small business manager. The question allows for in-depth explanation about the subject. The wording also flows very professionally.
What this needs is a point to argue, I feel that the answer to this could be a list of instructions to go through with every customer instead of treating each one differently.

3. My EQ draft:

What is the most efficient way to impact a community positively through music education?

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